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# The Iron Hollow — Chapter 1 PoC
# Scene 2: Sara Arrives
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define sara = Character("Sara", color="#5acbd5")
define thinking = Character("Sara", color="#1d9fa4", what_italic=True)
define luno = Character("Luno", color="#1b449d")
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define narrator = Character(None)
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# ── Persistent flags ──────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
default checkpoint_set = False
default rewind_used = False
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default purpose_chosen = False
default silence_chosen = False # here Sara learns that Luno asks everyone the same question
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# ── Entry point ───────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
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label start:
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scene bg training_yard
with fade
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"The Iron Hollow training yard sits inside a converted warehouse district. Stone walls, packed dirt, the smell of old metal and new sweat."
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thinking "So this is where the Iron Hollow has its base."
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show sara neutral at left
with easeinright
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thinking "Two others have arrived already. The boy over there is seems to know where to go, maybe I should ask him."
thinking "Looks like the other one noticed me."
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show luno curious at right
with easeinright
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jump luno_greeting
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label luno_greeting:
luno "You're here for the recruitment?"
sara "Yes. Where do I register?"
luno "The man over at that table takes your name. Then we wait."
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thinking "Seems like she told him where to go."
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luno "I'm Luno. Been here a few days already — helping with the wounded from last month's job. I know how things run here if you need anything."
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thinking "That's a strong question right away."
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luno "So. Money, glory, or are you just bored?"
jump choice_screen
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label rewind_choice:
if not checkpoint_set:
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jump kaeros_arrives
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show screen rewind_prompt
menu:
"[[ Rewind ]":
hide screen rewind_prompt
$ rewind_used = True
scene black
with dissolve
show screen teal_wash
"The world pulls back."
"Colour drains to teal. Sound slows to nothing."
hide screen teal_wash
scene bg training_yard
with dissolve
show sara neutral at left
show luno curious at right
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thinking "Let's try this again."
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jump choice_screen
"[[ Continue ]":
hide screen rewind_prompt
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jump kaeros_arrives
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label choice_screen:
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menu:
"Why are you here?"
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"[[ Create Checkpoint ]" if not checkpoint_set:
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$ checkpoint_set = True
scene black
with dissolve
"A flash. Sara's hand, signing something. A contract. The ink is red."
scene bg training_yard
with dissolve
show sara neutral at left
show luno curious at right
jump choice_screen
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"For the money, like anyone.":
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if rewind_used:
jump branch_money_post_rewind
else:
jump branch_money
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"To find something worth doing." if not purpose_chosen:
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jump branch_purpose
"I'd rather not say.":
jump branch_silence
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"[[ You asked the others the same thing, didn't you. ]" if silence_chosen:
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jump branch_sharp
label branch_money:
sara "Same reason as everyone else, I'd assume."
luno "Honest. I can work with that."
show luno amused at right
luno "Though if money's the goal, you don't look like you need it."
sara "Looks can be misleading."
show luno neutral at right
luno "Sure."
"A pause. Just a half-beat too long."
luno "They can be."
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"She doesn't push. But her eyes stay on Sara for another moment"
jump rewind_choice
label branch_money_post_rewind:
sara "Same reason as everyone else."
luno "Sure."
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thinking "Unremarkable. Fine."
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"But when Sara finishes speaking, Luno's eyes linger — just a half-second longer than they should."
show luno linger at right
"Not suspicion. Not quite. More like the feeling of reaching for something that moved."
show luno neutral at right
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thinking "Probably nothing."
"But it wasn't nothing."
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jump rewind_choice
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label branch_purpose:
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$ purpose_chosen = True
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sara "I'm not looking for money exactly. More... something to point myself at."
"A beat. Something opens in Luno's expression — not warm, but something."
show luno curious at right
luno "Huh. That's not what I expected."
sara "What did you expect?"
luno "Something about honour. Or family legacy."
show luno tilted at right
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luno "The clothes tell me nobility, and nobles are always on the look for honour."
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show sara pained at left
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sara "Honour is pointless when everyone is dead."
thinking "I said too much."
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"She can feel it land — can feel Luno actually {i}looking{/i} at her now, not just watching."
show luno soft at right
luno "...Yeah. I know that feeling."
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thinking "I should go back. I told her way too much"
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jump rewind_choice
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label branch_silence:
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$ silence_chosen = True
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sara "That's a fairly personal question for someone I've known thirty seconds."
luno "Fair. I ask everyone. You don't have to answer."
sara "...Then I won't."
luno "That's an answer too."
"She's not unfriendly. But Sara just became a question mark in Luno's mental ledger."
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jump rewind_choice
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label branch_sharp:
sara "You asked him the same thing."
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"She nods towards the guy who also arrived already."
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sara "Before I arrived."
"Luno goes still. Not alarmed — but recalibrating."
show luno still at right
luno "...You were watching from outside the gate?"
sara "The wall has gaps."
luno "Most people don't bother to look."
sara "I bother."
"A pause. Luno is weighing something."
luno "That's either very smart or very paranoid."
sara "Both, usually."
"Luno laughs — a real one, short and surprised."
show luno laugh at right
"But her eyes are sharper now, not warmer."
show luno sharp at right
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jump rewind_choice
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label kaeros_arrives:
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"Before the silence can settle, footsteps at the gate."
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show kaeros guarded at right
show mira curious at left
kaeros "Is this the Iron Hollow?"
luno "Looks like quite a few people are interested. You are at the right place."
luno "Why do you want to join the Hollow?"
mira "To protect people from evil---"
kaeros "To make some money. Have to live off something around here."
show mira timit at left
show luno laughing at right
luno "I see, you have you priorities in order."
show luno neutral at right
luno "I like that. I am Luno, I arrived a while a go. Give the man over there your names and wait."
sara "I am Sara, not sure what else to say."
kaeros "I am Kaeros, and this is Mira."
luno "She also just arrived you can register together."
scene black
with dissolve
scene bg table
show sara at left
show iron_hollow_mercenary at right
sara "The three of us are here to register."
"Iron Hollow Mercenary" "Tell me your names and blessing."
show mira excited at left
mira "I'm Mira, and I have a fire blessing. I can do a lot of things with it, like make bursts---"
show kaeros guarded at left
kaeros "I'm Kaeros, and I have a wind blessing."
kaeros "..."
"Iron Hollow Mercenary" "Alright, what about you?"
show sara at left
sara "My name is Sara, I have a wind blessing, but its really weak. My expertise is more with strategy."
"Iron Hollow Mercenary" "It's rare to have a strategist join a band of mercenaries. I hope you can at least hold your own in combat."
"Iron Hollow Mercenary" "I think fo-- five people are enough for now, grab Luno and that guy over there and we'll get started."
jump first_test
label first_test:
scene black
with dissolve
scene bg training_yard
"Iron Hollow Mercenary" "It's time to prove you worth. We are gonna start with a simple test, so everyone gets a feel for each other."
"Iron Hollow Mercenary" "One-on-one fights, but since we are an uneven number, one person will have to fight twice."
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return
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# ── Screens ───────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
screen rewind_prompt():
zorder 10
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text "Rewind available":
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xalign 0.05
yalign 0.95
color "#4ab8b8"
size 22
screen teal_wash():
zorder 20
add Solid("#1a4a4a") alpha 0.7